Response to peers and critique evaluation of business implementation plan

Hi, Kyle Segan
You have successfully addressed the problems of reducing the manufacturing cost of the electric car. You have also provided some figures to support your statement which is quite good for the business proposal.  Apart from this, you have mentioned about the implementation schedule of the plan in which you have talked about how to start the project to achieve the feasibility of the project. You have outlined what needs to do first and what is required to do in the last. This is providing a deep understanding of the project and strengthens the proposal. Your assignment has also included project review process to keep the project on track which is one of the advantages of the assignment. 
If you had included some more factors, the assignment would have been more impressive as well as strengthen. Your introduction is little poor. You could make your introduction more attractive as well as innovative. You need to provide some more realistic data to get insight into the project. One of the biggest mistakes that you have made in your plan is you have not provided a business implementation plan. Without the implementation plan, it is quite confusing to understand what the project is all about. You must provide the business implementation plan to make your assignment complete. The assignment would not be considered complete without it. Apart from this, you also need to do SWOT analysis as well as competitor analysis of the Ford to gain an understanding about the strengths, weaknesses, threats, opportunities, internal and external environment of the company. 
Thanks